Blog 13:Peer Review 2
I felt this second peer review session was much more informative and useful in locating errors in my paper. I specifically liked having the hard copy in front of me, becuase I was able to stay focused and not get lost in what the person was reading. I also think that this paper was easier for me to understand and write than the narrative assignment. I think this understanding also carries over to others in the class which allows for more effective comments and suggestions related to each specific paper. For my next draft I will be adding more quotations in order to produce a more concise, clear question and thesis. I always enjoy peer review, because the opinons of others can really be useful in filling in gaps that are unclear throughout the paper. Sometimes sentences make sense to me, becuase I know the overall purpose of the paper, but in reality these sentences could be confusing and irrelevant. Overall, peer review is a great way to have students give positive and negative feedback to other students in order to produce a more refined complete paper.

I agree that peer review is often very helpful. I am glad that we got to use the hard copies this time because it makes it easier to follow along and make corrections to the papers.
vredenke said this on April 16, 2009 at 7:10 pm
i agree about having a hard copy. I have found that it is very useful to ask every group member to go through their hard copy and circle all my grammatical errors on the hard copy. I have such a hard time catching my own grammar mistakes.
straitnk said this on April 20, 2009 at 3:02 am